Hi enza666, your firs 3d looks wery well for a firs time) (i don`t talking about design, only visualisation for the present)
yo have some problems with your render settings (while))
but i (and i think others too) don`t understand how and wherein we can help you?
If you understand russian, you must read the rools for a first time, if no, you must try to explane us, wherein you need help.
Good luck.